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Love is like a tattered rose,
Wilting by the moment
Thorns the only thing intact,
Sharper than a knife
Shining in the

Some say that this is untrue
They live in this illusion
Only to get broken
By the thorn upon the stem
Of the tattered rose
©2009 ~Hyuga1313
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Author's Comments

Written for the 100 theme challenge.

2. Love

Hope you like! :D

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:iconxwater-akatsuki-linx:
D: angst, i feel it.

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=Chan-Fan
~YumeNikkiClub
sora and death the kid are love :love:
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:iconhyuga1313:
Ya.

:raincloud:

LOL

--
"I reject your reality and substitute my own."

- Adam Savage
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Icon by ~TamRaki :hug:
:iconmidnight-eclipses:
Like. :)

I'd love to see you extend on this poem though. Add much more imagery to it. Show us the rose more rather than explain. :)

--
[Love is never simple
But, believing is and if you believe
in the one that you truly love
then, everything's going to be ok.
]
:iconhyuga1313:
Thank you for the comment. :hug:

And in truth I kinda rushed this one... ^^;

--
"I reject your reality and substitute my own."

- Adam Savage
--
Icon by ~TamRaki :hug:
:iconmidnight-eclipses:
You're welcome. And it's ok. Just go back, and really dig deep for those words. I wanna see how it is in your mind, not mine. :D

--
[Love is never simple
But, believing is and if you believe
in the one that you truly love
then, everything's going to be ok.
]
:iconhyuga1313:
I will. :D

--
"I reject your reality and substitute my own."

- Adam Savage
--
Icon by ~TamRaki :hug:

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